She was feeling defeated. She had already lived through four centuries; how much proof would it take? “People are never going to change.” There would always be the same stress, no matter the time or place: money, status, attitude, other people. Maybe it was time to give up.
“One more,” she thought as she stepped through the portal, for what she hoped was the last time.
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Recording Life Under the radar 
Human nature doesn’t change, that’s the problem.
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And yet what is it that keeps us hoping? Great story, leaving me with some thought provoking ponderings.
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time or dimension travel? I love a good alternate reality story! (no! I’ll get that for you) “…well, duh!”
lol
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I love this and at the same time, am completely disheartened by this. God, I hope things don’t continue on some endless loop like that…
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Four centuries. One more time. I can relate to part of that!
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There’s always hope! Maybe that will never change. 🙂
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Ooh, I love that! Four centuries is a long time to hope with no change, but I like that she tries again. Yay!
And crap – I didn’t quite know it was Thursday. I just finished. Linking up!
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Ohhh how frustrating. I hope she keeps trying!
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I admire and thank her for her perseverance.
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What an intriguing beginning to what could be an amazing novel! I like to believe that in the end hope always prevails. If we give up hoping, all is surely lost, and I don’t want that to be the end of the story, of our story! I want to know about her previous experiences and why she is determined to try one more time. What does she hope to accomplish. I loved this!
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I want to know more! 🙂
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Love this!!
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oh four centuries :O hopefully she’ll see the change she wants!
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What a great story. So much said in so few words.
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